wow (tone dripping with sarcasm)...
Honestly, I am used to you sunshine peoples now... but my brother wanted me to tell you he hates you. (sorry)
Oh, and why did you stop with four scenes (if you want to call them scenes)? You have this long song and all you have to go with it(after the whole sun flying by the earth thing) is the sun, a couple of lollipops, and four palm trees(?) shaking like crack addicts in need of a fix.
Come on now.